GENEROSITY By Randy Baranczyk Draft January 10, 2008 1254 Juno Ave. Saint Paul MN 55116 651-895-6839 Cast: Generous Man – middle-aged Woman's Voice – middle-aged, phone voice only Other men – three to eight other men (no dialogue) INT. MEN'S HEALTH CLUB LOCKER ROOM Several men are in the locker room getting dressed. GENEROUS MAN is seated on a bench. A cell phone on the bench next to him rings. He looks at the phone for a moment and then presses a button, putting the phone in speaker mode so he can continue dressing. Everyone else stops to listen. GENEROUS MAN Hello. WOMAN'S VOICE Honey, it's me. Are you at the club? GENEROUS MAN Yes. WOMAN'S VOICE I am at the mall now and found this beautiful leather coat. It's only a thousand dollars. Is it OK if I buy it? GENEROUS MAN Sure, go ahead if you like it that much. WOMAN'S VOICE I also stopped by the Mercedes dealership and saw the new models. I saw one I really liked. GENEROUS MAN How much? WOMAN'S VOICE Sixty thousand. GENEROUS MAN Mmmm, okay. But for that price I want it with all the options. WOMAN'S VOICE Great! Oh, and one more thing -- the house we wanted last year is back on the market. They're asking $950,000. GENEROUS MAN Well, then go ahead and give them an offer, but just offer 900,000. WOMAN'S VOICE Okay. I'll see you later! I love you! GENEROUS MAN I love you, too. Bye. Generous Man picks up the phone and hangs up. The other men in the locker room are looking at him in astonishment. Generous Man looks at the phone. GENEROUS MAN Anyone know whose phone this is? FADE OUT THE END
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